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雅思写作开头段如何写好?

2020-07-16     环球教育

  雅思写作在雅思备考中是很重要的一部分。雅思写作是雅思考试必考的个项目,写作常常被人称为书面表达,可见,写作项目对于考生表达能力的要求环球教育的老师表示,雅思写作获得的作文,都离不开个引人入胜的开头。


  在写作中雅思托福的区别有哪些?


  1)场景或背景信息,即题目中出现的phenomenon。


  2)些人的观点(some people's opinion),这部分在改写文章段时可要可不要,考生可按照自己的情况来安排。


  3)个人观点,这部分在有些文章的开段中也可以不要。


  环球教育的老师说,大作文要求字数至少达到250字,在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排,段好写3-5句话,大约40字左右,并且切忌在段就掏心掏肺把什么话都说完。因此大作文开方式通常有以下几种情况:


  1)题目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon),有时也出现些人的观点,并且题目中字数较多。这种情况下险的办法是将题目中的背景信息及些人的观点重新表达(paraphrase),可以做:


  主动语态<=>被动语态


  主谓宾<=>主系表


  某些近义词互换


  Example:


  At present,it is hard for college students to find jobs.Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography.To what extent do you agree?


  →The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation.Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography.其后再加


  在写作中雅思托福的区别有哪些?


  考生自己的观点即可。


  2)题目中包含了背景信息,有时出现些人的观点,但题目中字数较少,若直接重新表达,字数凑不到40字左右。这种情况下推荐以下2种开方式来证字数:


  把笼统信息细节化即通过举例来解释说明题目中的背景信息。


  Example:


  International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems?


  →The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism's gaining momentum virtually all over the world.Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture。其后加入考生个人观点即可。


  追溯历史,过去与现在形成对比。


  Example:


  International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems?


  →Prior to the early 1900s,the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel.However,the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient.International tourism is gaining momentum and has become a big industry.其后加入考生个人观点即可。


  3)题目中仅出现部分人的观点,而没有背景信息。这种情况下,我们可以根据这部分人的观点所涉及的信息在开段附加对背景信息的描述。


  Example:


  The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel.Do you agree or disagree?


  →In the process of industrialization and urbanization,the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense.From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed,tried and implemented.Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem.其后加入考生个人观点即可。


  以上就是雅思作文写好开头段的方法,环球教育教育的老师提醒广大考生,定要注意开头段不要出现语法错误。在文章的开始就出错,容易给人留下负面印象,导致终雅思写作的分数不高。




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