雅思大作文7分范文及解析：多元文化社会的优势

　　《Multicultural societies, where people of different ethnic groups live together,can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country.To what extent do you agree or disagree?》

　　题目来源：2016年4月2日大陆雅思大作文

　　题目大意：多元文化社会，即多种族的人会生活在一起，可以带来更多的优势而不是缺点给一个国家。在多大程度上同意或不同意？

　　思路解析：题干一句话，出题方式为To what extent do you agree or disagree?同意不同意类型，建议结构使用完全一边倒或倾向型，立场需要站一方。

　　话题类型：文化。话题词：multicultural society；a country；ethnic groups。逻辑词汇：more

　　写作示范：

　　In the era of globalization,multicultural societies are common in most developed countries.As a consequence,new challenges at both national and international levels have become apparent,and successful adaptation to this new phenomenon of migration appears as a fundamental issue.Therefore，there are some people who argue that this tendency would bring more merits rather than demerits to society.Personally,I partially agree with this idea.

　　First of all,a multicultural society promotes the innovation of the whole society to a certain extent.This is because people from different countries speak different mother tongues,which represents diverse ways of thinking patterns.In other words,the existence of a pluralistic society represents the diversity of thinking modes in that society.When people communicate with people with different thinking modes,it will eventually be conducive to the cultivation of their divergent thinking,thus promoting the innovation of the whole society.

　　Besides,a multicultural society is conducive to the integration of different cultures.In the past,due to geographical isolation and other factors,people from different countries did not understand each other enough,and even because of the limited information or even blockade,citizens from various ethnic groups may misunderstand or discriminate against other countries.However,with the development of the Internet and global transportation,people now live together regardless of their nationalities and communicate with each other to exchange what they have,which is beneficial to enhance the understanding between people of all countries.For example,European people's understanding of China used to mostly come from movies,and misunderstood China as a deprived and backward country.As more and more Europeans come to live or work in China,but now a growing number of people recognize and appreciate Chinese culture,which facilitates cultural exchanges between China and foreign countries.

　　Admittedly,the existence of a multicultural society does bring about some problems.One of the most obvious is that for people with weak national identity,they are very easy to be eroded by other countries'cultures,and eventually lead to cultural assimilation.However,at present,governments of all countries attach great importance to the protection and publicity of their own culture,and strengthen the education of history and language since childhood.I believe that,to a certain extent,this can improve the cultural identity of their citizens.

　　In conclusion,despite the drawbacks that multiculturalism may bring about,it seems to me that this would exert beneficial impacts on the countries globally.

      相关词汇和语法结构:

　　Era时代

　　pluralistic society多元文化

　　Diverse多样的

　　Diversity多样性

　　Thinking patterns思维模式

　　Conducive有益于

　　Integration融合

　　Isolation隔离

　　Blockade封锁

　　Deprived贫穷的

　　Erode侵蚀

　　Assimilation同化

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