雅思G类大作文考题分析-广告类

　　2020年10月8日（北京机考）出现的一道雅思G类大作文题目为:

　　Advertisements of toys and fast food nowadays are usually aiming at children.Some say that this has a negative effect on children as well as their family.Do you agree or disagree?

　　审题∶话题为“广告的影响”，限定词包括“玩具和快餐广告”“针对孩子”“对孩子和家庭的负面影响”，在构思和论述过程中，要注意充分回应“孩子”和“家庭”，并用具体的话题词汇拓展关键词。题型为"同意与否”，不涉及to what exent，题中也只有一个观点，所以立场可以是同意或不同意。如果同意，就写这类广告对孩子和家庭有什么负面影响。如果不同意，就写这类广告对孩子和家庭为什么没有负面影响/有什么好影响。

　　范文:269 words

　　lt is true that children have become the target audience of advertising for fast food and toys.l agree with the idea that such advertising is harmful to both youngsters and their families.

　　Frequent exposure to advertisements may cause health problems for children.This is mainly because young consumers are so innocence that they can be easily persuaded by commercials produced by food companies and toy manufacturers.As a result，many children gradually become obsessed with junk snacks like chips,hamburgers and instant noodles that are high in calories;which may result in disordered eating.Similarly,some young netizens are getting addicted to electronic toys that are advertised on the Internet where they spend most of their free time.Such addiction is often accompanied with a sedentary lifestyle that may lead to diseases like obesity.

　　Families can also be adversely impacted by advertising that aim at children.For most working-class parents with a limited income that must be wisely allocated to paying for mortgages,insurance and daily goods,they may face financial difficulties if they fail to deal with the pester power.For example，my sister’s credit card was overdrawn last month because she purchased a set of limited edition resin kits for her young son who had been pestering for a long time after seeing the poster in a shopping mall.Despite of having managed to make the ends meet eventually，my sister and her husband still suffered anxiety for a while.

　　In conclusion,I agree that the advertisements targeting children are not only detrimental to youngsters'health but might also cause a financial burden on their parents.

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